Homework 2.26
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you prefer to watch TV or use the Internet?
: I prefer to use the Internet. Since I was very young, my parents removed TV in home because me and my sister were so focused on TV.
So I have lived for a long time without TV. I\'m not used to watch TV even I have TV at home now. While Internet is very convenience.
강사 첨삭
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~ T. Tricia
I prefer to use the Internet.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I prefer to use the Internet to watch.
Since I was very young, my parents removed TV in home because me and my sister were so focused on TV.
>> Since I was very young, my parents already removed the TV from our home because my sister and I used to focused on watching TV very much.
So I have lived for a long time without TV.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m not used to watch TV even I have TV at home now.
>> I\'m not used to watching TV even if we have a TV at home now.
While Internet is very convenience.
>> While the Internet is very convenient.
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