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2018-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ** Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations? I think it's a kind of complicated question. If the poor nation is just poor thing because of their nature problem, wealthy nations should help them to donate their money and telants. However if they have another issue above nature things like focus on military or a few dictators, so other wealthy nations also shouldn't give them any help becuase it's their problem of the government.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Steve!


I think, your composition pertains to North Korea\'s situation. ^^

Well, I do agree with you.

They shouldn\'t be given any help if they focus on strengthening their military forces or if they show any violent actions to start a misunderstanding among nations.

Thank you for sharing your opinion again.


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
** Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations? 

>> correct

 I think it\'s a kind of complicated question.

>> correct

If the poor nation is just poor thing because of their nature problem, wealthy nations should help them to donate their money and telants.

>> If the poor nation is just poor because of their natural resources problem, wealthy nations should help them by donating some of their money and talents.

However if they have another issue above nature things like focus on military or a few dictators, so other wealthy nations also shouldn\'t give them any help becuase it\'s their problem of the government.

>> However, if they have another issue besides natural resources, like focusing on military or a few dictators, other wealthy nations shouldn\'t give them any help because it\'s their government\'s problem.

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