homework (!2/27) I have been decided change the way My habit .
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Hello there [이름]!
Wow! I am proud of you.
I hope that you will always be healthy and fit.
I know that you are conscious about your health.
I\'ll see you in class.
Take care.
Teacher Nina
I have been decided change the way My habit .
>> I have decided to change my habits.
It is about exercise and food.
>> correct
when I heard from nurse who was working in healthcare center .At that time I know I have high blood pressure.
>> I knew that I have a high blood pressure from the nurse who was working in a healthcare center.
I think It cause my parents.
>> It is because of my parents.
so I have to change my habit.
>> correct
for example, first I have to take a wake for 40 minute more.
>> For example, I have to take a walk for more than forty minutes.
and I have to eat low salty food. and a lot of vegetable.
>> And I have to eat low salty food and a lot of vegetables.
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