homework (!2/27) I have been decided change the way My habit .

2016-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I have been decided change the way My habit . It is about exercise and food. when I heard from nurse who was working in healthcare center . At that time I know I have high blood pressure. I think It cause my parents. so I have to change my habit. for example, first I have to take a wake for 40 minute more. and I have to eat low salty food. and a lot of vegetable.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

Wow! I am proud of you.

I hope that you will always be healthy and fit.

I know that you are conscious about your health.
I\'ll see you in class.

Take care.
Teacher Nina


I have been decided change the way My habit .

>> I have decided to change my habits.

It is about exercise and food.

>> correct

when I heard from nurse who was working in healthcare center .At that time I know I have high blood pressure.

>> I knew that I have a high blood pressure from the nurse who was working in a healthcare center.
I think It cause my parents.

>> It is because of my parents.
so I have to change my habit. 

>> correct
for example, first I have to take a wake for 40 minute more.

>> For example, I have to take a walk for more than forty minutes.
and I have to eat low salty food. and a lot of vegetable.

>> And I have to eat low salty food and a lot of vegetables.

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