Homework 2

ESSAY: What annoys you the most when traveling to another place? Traveling to another place is very fun experience for me, but if something annoys me,that would be loneliness. I'm a stranger or foreigner in another place, so I feel like I don't belong to anywhere. I thought it is very happy thing to live one's daily life comfortably in one's own society when I was traveling.

Hi there [이름]!^^ You are outspoken even with writing!^^ Be careful where you use your article \"a\".^^ This is great!^^ I hope the next time you travel you\'ll have company to fight the lonliness. T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Traveling to another place is very fun experience for me, but if something annoys me,that would be loneliness. >> Traveling to another place is a very fun experience for me, but if something annoys me,that would be loneliness.  I\'m a stranger or foreigner in another place, so I feel like I don\'t belong to anywhere. >> I\'m a stranger or a foreigner in another place, so I feel like I don\'t belong anywhere. I thought it is very happy thing to live one\'s daily life comfortably in one\'s own society when I was traveling. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s a great feeling to have an experience in another society when we travel.