homework 2/5 , 2/6, 2/7

2018-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

2/5 1.of 2.decrease 3.behaviour 4.fully 5.make 6.It 7.them 8.? 9.? 10.hormons 11. ? 12. in 13.making 14. having 15.time The sentence was so difficult however interested. 2/6 1. shortage 2.sustainability 3.nutrient deficiency 4.urban sprawl 5.prosperity 6.eaters 7.failure 8. application 9.minimalize 10.modification 11.resistant 2/7 1.D 2.B 3.C 4.A 5.D 6.B 7.C 8.D 9.A 10.A It takes more much times than its that I thaught. I will write a assey and send it as soon as possible.

강사 첨삭

Good morning sir [이름]. I appreciate your effort in answering these homework. I gave you the hard (a little bit) ones so I can see if what you can come up with. I am pretty sure you can do well if you prepare enough. J Just keep it up!

~T. Irene~

2/5
1.of

>> Correct.
2.decrease

>> As far as their hormone levels are CONCERNED, when men and women are in love, they are more similar to each other than at any other time.
3.behaviour

>> >> As far as their hormone levels are concerned, when men and women are in love, they are more similar to each other THAN at any other time.
4.fully

>> It has LONG been known that love can play havoc with hormone levels.
5.make

>> It has long been known that love can PLAY havoc with hormone levels.
6.It

>> For example the hormone cortisol, WHICH is known for its calming effect on the body, dips dramatically when one person is attracted to another, putting the love-struck on a par with sufferers of obsessive compulsive disorder.
7.them

>> For example the hormone cortisol, which is known for its calming effect on the body, dips dramatically when one person is attracted to ANOTHER, putting the love-struck on a par with sufferers of obsessive compulsive disorder.
8.?

>> In women, it\'s quite the REVERSE.
9.?

>> Testosterone levels, which TEND to be lower among females, rise towards those of the male.
10.hormons

>> Testosterone levels, which tend to be lower among females, rise towards THOSE of the male.

11. ?

>> Donatella Marazziti of the University of Pisa, Italy, PUTS this down to nature attempting to eliminate the differences between the sexes.
12. in

>> BY doing so, they can concentrate fully on reproduction.
13.making

>> By doing so, they can concentrate fully ON reproduction.
14. having

>> This suggestion seems to be supported by the fact that NEITHER couples in a long term relationship, nor participants in the study who were single at the time of the experiment, exhibited such changes.
15.time

>> This suggestion seems to be supported by the fact that neither couples in a long TERM relationship, nor participants in the study who were single at the time of the experiment, exhibited such changes.
The sentence was so difficult however interested.
>>  The sentences were so difficult however they were interesting.
2/6
1. Shortage

>> shortages
2.sustainability

>> Correct.
3.nutrient deficiency

>> Correct.

OR >> malnutrition
4.urban sprawl

>> Correct.

OR >> urbanization
5.prosperity

>> Correct.

6.eaters

>> overeat
7.failure

>> Correct.

8. application

>> Correct.

9.minimalize

>> minimizing
10.modification

>> Correct.

11.resistant

>> resistance
2/7
1.D

>> B. blissfully
2.B

>> A. perverting
3.C

>> Correct.
4.A

>> B. water
5.D

>> Correct.
6.B

>> D. ailing
7.C

>> A. token
8.D

>> B. deduced
9.A

>> Correct.

10.A
>> Correct.

It takes more much times than its that I thaught.

>> It takes more times than I thought.

I will write a assey and send it as soon as possible.

>> I will write an essay and send it as soon as possible.

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