homework 2/5 , 2/6, 2/7
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Good morning sir [이름]. I appreciate your effort in answering these homework. I gave you the hard (a little bit) ones so I can see if what you can come up with. I am pretty sure you can do well if you prepare enough. J Just keep it up!
~T. Irene~
2/5
1.of
>> Correct.
2.decrease
>> As far as their hormone levels are CONCERNED, when men and
women are in love, they are more similar to each other than at any other time.
3.behaviour
>> >> As far as their hormone levels are concerned, when
men and women are in love, they are more similar to each other THAN at any
other time.
4.fully
>> It has LONG been known that love can play havoc with
hormone levels.
5.make
>> It has long been known that love can PLAY havoc with
hormone levels.
6.It
>> For example the hormone cortisol, WHICH is known for its
calming effect on the body, dips dramatically when one person is attracted to
another, putting the love-struck on a par with sufferers of obsessive
compulsive disorder.
7.them
>> For example the hormone cortisol, which is known for its
calming effect on the body, dips dramatically when one person is attracted to ANOTHER,
putting the love-struck on a par with sufferers of obsessive compulsive
disorder.
8.?
>> In women, it\'s quite the REVERSE.
9.?
>> Testosterone levels, which TEND to be lower among females,
rise towards those of the male.
10.hormons
>> Testosterone levels, which tend to be lower among females, rise towards THOSE of the male.
11. ?
>> Donatella Marazziti of the University of Pisa, Italy, PUTS
this down to nature attempting to eliminate the differences between the sexes.
12. in
>> BY doing so, they can concentrate fully on reproduction.
13.making
>> By doing so, they can concentrate fully ON reproduction.
14. having
>> This suggestion seems to be supported by the fact that NEITHER
couples in a long term relationship, nor participants in the study who were
single at the time of the experiment, exhibited such changes.
15.time
>> This suggestion seems to be supported by the fact that neither
couples in a long TERM relationship, nor participants in the study who were
single at the time of the experiment, exhibited such changes.
The sentence was so difficult however
interested.
>> The sentences were so difficult however they
were interesting.
2/6
1. Shortage
>> shortages
2.sustainability
>> Correct.
3.nutrient deficiency
>> Correct.
OR >> malnutrition
4.urban sprawl
>> Correct.
OR >> urbanization
5.prosperity
>> Correct.
6.eaters
>> overeat
7.failure
>> Correct.
8. application
>> Correct.
9.minimalize
>> minimizing
10.modification
>> Correct.
11.resistant
>> resistance
2/7
1.D
>> B. blissfully
2.B
>> A. perverting
3.C
>> Correct.
4.A
>> B. water
5.D
>> Correct.
6.B
>> D. ailing
7.C
>> A. token
8.D
>> B. deduced
9.A
>> Correct.
10.A
>> Correct.
It takes more much times than its that I thaught.
>> It takes more times than I thought.
I will write a assey and send it as soon as possible.
>> I will write an essay and send it as soon as possible.
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