Homework #2
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What do you do outside of school and work? Describe any hobbies you have, sports you participate in, or other activities you regularly enjoy.
A.
Hi, Adela,
I think that you will hear my tired voice again. XD
Well, I do usually many things - like listening to music, taking a walk, doing the laundry, playing a game, studying related to my job and so on.
Especially I try to focus on self-improvement and health.
So I usually plan a schedule every week and also try to keep my promise, but that’s not easy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate, thank you for remembering my name and constantly doing your homework.
I hope you will enjoy your weekend even if you will go to work. Don\'t forget to unwind even for a little while.
Hi, Adela,
I think that you will hear my tired voice again. XD
>> CORRECT
Well, I do usually many things, like listening to music, taking a walk, doing the laundry, playing a game, studying something related to my job and so on.
>> Well, I usually do many things - like listening to music, taking a walk, doing the laundry, playing a game, studying related to my job and so on.
Especially I try to focus on self-improvement and health.
>> Especially that I\'m trying to focus on my self-improvement and my health.
So I usually plan a schedule every week and also try to keep my promise, but that’s not easy.
>> So I usually plan an activity every week and also try to keep my promise but that\'s not easy.
I hope you will enjoy your weekend even if you will go to work. Don\'t forget to unwind even for a little while.
Hi, Adela,
I think that you will hear my tired voice again. XD
>> CORRECT
Well, I do usually many things, like listening to music, taking a walk, doing the laundry, playing a game, studying something related to my job and so on.
>> Well, I usually do many things - like listening to music, taking a walk, doing the laundry, playing a game, studying related to my job and so on.
Especially I try to focus on self-improvement and health.
>> Especially that I\'m trying to focus on my self-improvement and my health.
So I usually plan a schedule every week and also try to keep my promise, but that’s not easy.
>> So I usually plan an activity every week and also try to keep my promise but that\'s not easy.
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