Homework 2

2016-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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How can you motivate others or yourself to have hope when there seems like there's no hope? Give some examples. There are some methods about motivate others or myself. First, Let him know his ability. Most people who feel depress and discourage don't know their potential. So they assess themselves too low. then, I tell him 'you can do it, it is not difficult to you do that, and nothing is loss as of your trying.' Second, Think about blueprint of my future's image. for example, If do this steadily until make dreams to real, I think that I can nice things like play the sports games and eat delicious food with family and best friends. I think that It can give me power to effort.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sun! Happy Friday!Thank you so much for sending in your composition. ^^ You did very good and I hope you will keep up the good work. Ennjoy your weekend and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ How can you motivate others or yourself to have hope when there seems like there\'s no hope? Give some examples.>>correctThere are some methods about motivate others or myself. >>There are many ways on how you motivate others or yourself.First, Let him know his ability.>>correctMost people who feel depress and discourage don\'t know their potential. >>Most people who feel depressed and discouraged don\'t know their potential.So they assess themselves too low. So they assess themselves too low. >>So they underestimate themselves. then, I tell him \'you can do it, it is not difficult to you do that, and nothing is loss as of your trying.\'>>Then I will tell him \"You can do it, there is no harm in trying!\" OR: Then I will encourage them t their best. Second, Think about blueprint of my future\'s image. >>Second we have to think of the future. for example, If do this steadily until make dreams to real, I think that I can nice things like play the sports games and eat delicious food with family and best friends. >>For example, if I make my dreams come true, I can spend more quality time with the people I love.I think that It can give me power to effort. >>I think doing my best can give motivation.  

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