homework 2

2016-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

In my case, during working in my office, I am using social networks services. I think that nowadays, it is very important for jobs and business. When social networks services sometimes have some problems, I feel very uncomfortable. Also most people make their friend on the networks like Kakao Story and Kakao talk in Korea. It is vey comfortable.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

Most people are addicted to SNS. It\'s like a part of their our already. People cannot live without it.

Have a nice day. See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

In my case, during working in my office, I am using social networks services.

>>In my case, during office hours, I use social networks services.
I think that nowadays, it is very important for jobs and business.

>>I think that nowadays, it is very important for jobs and businesses.
When social networks services sometimes have some problems, I feel very uncomfortable.

>>correct!
Also most people make their friend on the networks like Kakao Story and Kakao talk in Korea.
>>correct!

It is very comfortable.

>>correct!

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