homework 2/7 essay

The Tokyo skyline that my family and I felt was leveloff but, having a lot of shapes which included nature's elevations and technology's heights ,Comparing with Seoul skyline that fluctated as having the Nam san mountain and a lot of hills. I'm sorry that my vague speech makes miaunderstand for you.My family and I didn't go to the mountain of Tokyo. Actually, my son and I drawn a scenery of innercity where my family stayed the hotel in tokyo during 3days.

Sir [이름], thank you so much for your effort in doing the homework no matter how busy you are. I understand that it looks so hard for you at this time. It really is. Everything we do or learn for the first time is quite hard. You can compare yourself to your son when he was still learning how to speak. J However, like anything in life, we get familiar with things and it becomes easier then. I know you can do it!

~T. Irene~

The Tokyo skyline that my family and I felt was leveloff but, having a lot of shapes which included nature\'s elevations and technology\'s heights.

>> The Tokyo skyline that my family and I witnessed was high level but there were a lot of shapes which included natural elevations and high rise building brought about by technology.

Comparing with Seoul skyline that fluctated as having the Nam san mountain and a lot of hills.
>> It can be compared to Seoul’s skyline which showcases the Nam san mountain and a lot of hills.
I\'m sorry that my vague speech makes miaunderstand for you.

>> I\'m sorry that my vague speech makes it hard for you to understand me.

My family and I didn\'t go to the mountain of Tokyo.

>> Correct.

OR>> My family and I didn\'t go to any mountain in Tokyo.

Actually, my son and I drawn a scenery of innercity where my family stayed the hotel in tokyo during 3days.

>> Actually, my son and I have drawn the scenery of the inner city where the hotel that my family stayed in for 3 days is located.