Homework 2
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jack!
Thanks for doing your homework.
You did pretty well here.
Most of your sentences were okay.
Just remember the proper capitalization of words and take note of the articles.
Check my corrections below.
Have a wonderful day!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
Hello, Marie.
>> CORRECT!
It is saturday.
>> CORRECT!
>> Saturday (capitalization)
How are you doing this weekend?
>> CORRECT!
anyway
>> Anyway...
I\'ve ever slept many hotel when I went on a trip.
>> I\'ve slept in many hotels during my various trips abroad.
Because I travel with my girlfriend every year.
>> I travel with my girlfriend every year.
For example, I went on a trip with her in Paris.
>> CORRECT!
We made a reservation at the hotel before the trip.
>> We made a hotel reservation before the trip.
After the tourism We arrived at hotel.
>> After the tour, we arrived in the hotel.
We didn\'t know that the hotel room was very small.
>> CORRECT!
It was smaller than We thought when i arrived there.
>> It was smaller than we thought.
So We slept uncomfortable there....
>> So it was very uncomfortable to sleep there.
Actually, We were really so tired that We already fall asleep ..
>> Actually, we were exhausted so we just fell asleep.
Before the trip We check our room size.
>> After that, we always checked the size of the room before our trip.
Because We want to sleep comfortable at the hotel.
>> We want to sleep comfortably in a hotel.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT!
Have you good weekend.
>> CORRECT!
>> a
See you monday Marie.
>> See you on Monday, Marie.
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