Homework (2)
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe yourself in 3 sentences only
My name is [Name] Tae Yeong. I was born 1990. My birthday is twenty. June.
I'm attending school and senior in university. the school name is Busan University foreign of studies. I spent to a lot of time learn English, Vietnam and international trade.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Yeong:)
Thank you and I appreciate your effort to answer your homework.
Please check your correction below:
My name is [Name] Tae Yeong.
>> Correct!
>> OR: You can call me Jang Tae Yeong.
I was born 1990. My birthday is twenty. June.
>> I was born in June 20,1990
I\'m attending school and senior in university. the school name is Busan University foreign of studies.
>> I am currently studying at Busan University foreign of studies.
I spent to a lot of time learn English, Vietnam and international trade.
>>I spend a lot of my time learning English so that I can go to Vietnam and international trade.
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