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2018-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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2/8 hitching extend recoiled posed contain famished 2/9 1. which 2. declaires 3. ahead 4. ascribed 5. goal 6. plunge 2/11 1. b 2. d 3. b 4. b 5. a My family and I had visited to have various japanese rocal foods in Tokyo of Japan, in 15th November 2017. Actually, my wife and I like to have a experience about eating exotic foods.so, we always research diverse foods thought the TV programme or the internet. When we found the meals which we didn't have chance of eating,possibly,rapidly, we make a plan of visiting where meals saled.our Tokyo travelling is according to that reason. However,there was another reason that my son wanted to swim where swimming-pools were located various hotel because he was still a novice swimer.so I have to help him swim in limmittre area.when we visited another hotel, my son's first question is that "Is there swimming-pool?.besides there was a question of fatility's condition.so before we decided a plan that include hotel, we had to research about hotel's

강사 첨삭

Hello sir [이름]! At last! J Thank you for answering our homework. Please check out all the corrections. Try to understand why they are the correct choices. If you have any further questions, don’t hesitate to ask me. I will see you in class later.

~T. Irene~

2/8
hitching

>> Correct.
extend

>> range
recoiled

>> retracted
posed

>> contended
contain

>> pose
famished

>>voracious
2/9
1. Which

>> Correct.
2. declaires

>> waxes
3. ahead

>> aloft
4. ascribed
>> ascribed

5. goal
>>intention

6. plunge
>> keel
2/11
1. b
>> Correct.

2. d
>> Correct.

3. b
>> Correct.

4. b
>> Correct.

5. b
>> Correct.

My family and I had visited to have various japanese rocal foods in Tokyo of Japan, in 15th November 2017.

>> My family and I had visited various places and tasted many Japanese local foods in Tokyo, Japan, on the 15th of November 2017.

Actually, my wife and I like to have a experience about eating exotic foods.so, we always research diverse foods thought the TV programme or the internet.

>> Actually, my wife and I like to experience eating exotic foods so we always researched on diverse foods through TV programmes or the internet.

When we found the meals which we didn\'t have chance of eating,possibly,rapidly, we make a plan of visiting where meals saled.

>> When we find the dishes which we haven’t had the chance of eating, we immediately make a plan of visiting the place where it is being sold.

our Tokyo travelling is according to that reason.

>> Our Tokyo travel was according to that reason.

However,there was another reason that my son wanted to swim where swimming-pools were located various hotel because he was still a novice swimer.

>> However, there was another reason. My son wanted to swim in the hotel’s swimming-pools because he was still a novice swimmer.

so I have to help him swim in limmittre area.

>> So I had to help him swim without limit in those areas.

when we visited another hotel, my son\'s first question is that \"Is there swimming-pool?

>> When we visited another hotel, my son\'s first question was, \"Is there a swimming-pool?”

besides there was a question of fatility\'s condition. so before we decided a plan that include hotel, we had to research about hotel\'s

>> There was always the question of the facility\'s condition so before we decided on the plan regarding the hotel, we had to first research about the hotel.

 

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