Homework 2

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~~ Teacher Sharon

Secondly, allowing people to smoke in all public places isn\'t beneficial for education.

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This is because children like to imitate others\' behavior.

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Also, teenagers like to do things which they don\'t allow like smoking and drinking because teenagers want to show their superiority.

>> Also, teenagers like to do things which they are not allowed to do like smoking and drinking because teenagers want to show their superiority.

For instance, in Korea, smoking near bus stops and schools is illegal because showing smoking to students isn\'t advantageous to education and students\' health.

>> For instance, in Korea, smoking near bus stops and schools is illegal because exposing students to smoking isn\'t advantageous to their education and health.

Therefore, it is evident that smoking should be allowed in certain areas because allowing people to smoke in public places isn\'t beneficial for education.

>>Therefore, it is evident that smoking should be allowed only in certain areas because allowing people to smoke in public places isn\'t beneficial for the education of children. 
In conclusion, all countries should make rules that are related to smoking because smoking in public areas can affect not only to smokers but also to non-smokers.

>> In conclusion, all countries should make rules that are related to smoking because smoking in public areas can affect not only smokers but also non-smokers.