Homework 2
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
How do you feel if you leave the house without your cell phone?
If I leave the house without cell phone, I feel uncomfortable. Because my life became more convenient by using cell phone such as using google map, utilized Apps.
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-Teacher Shelly-
How do you feel if you leave the house without your cell phone?
If I leave the house without cell phone, I feel uncomfortable.
>>> If I leave our house without a cell phone, I would feel uncomfortable.
Because my life became more convenient by using cell phone such as using google map, utilized Apps.
>>> My life became more convenient when I use my cell phone.
>>> The applications in my cell phone are very useful like Google maps and utilized applications.
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