Homework#2
학생이 쓴 원문
If lying is wrong, are white lies okay? Explore your answer.
Hello! joylin. Sorry, I\'m late to summit the homework because i went to the my grandfather house from Friday to Sunday
You asked to me that question. My answer is that lying is bad thing, but I think while lies are necessary.
First, white lying make the other people hopeful! I think you know what I say.
When you or my friend was depressd becasue of the exam grade, can we tell \" You didn\'t study hard\"?
Maybe we can\'t tell like that.
Second, The best example is the X-mas.
If many parents say \"Santa isn\'t exiting , the children may lose their purity and don\'t expect the X-mas.
The thought of the other people may be different to me
But , That\'s why white lying is necessary.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the questions.
It doesn\'t matter if you submitted it late. I hope that your visit to your grandfather\'s house was fun.
Here are my corrections.
Hello! joylin. Sorry, I\'m late to summit the homework because i went to the my grandfather house from Friday to Sunday
>> Hello, Joylin! Sorry, I\'m late to submit my homework because I went to my grandfather\'s house from Friday to Sunday.
You asked to me that question.
>> You asked me that question.
My answer is that lying is bad thing, but I think while lies are necessary.
>> My answer is that lying is a bad thing, but I think while lies are necessary.
First, white lying make the other people hopeful! I think you know what I say.
>> First, white lies make other people hopeful! I think you know what I say.
When you or my friend was depressd becasue of the exam grade, can we tell \" You didn\'t study hard\"?
>> When my friends were depressed because of the exam grade, can we tell \" You didn\'t study hard?\"
Maybe we can\'t tell like that.
>> Maybe we can\'t say it like that.
Second, The best example is the X-mas.
>> Secondly, the best example is Christmas.
If many parents say \"Santa isn\'t exiting , the children may lose their purity and don\'t expect the X-mas.
>> If many parents say \"Santa isn\'t exciting, the children may lose their purity and don\'t expect anything in Christmas.
The thought of the other people may be different to me. But , That\'s why white lying is necessary.
>> The thoughts of other people may be different to me but still, white lies are necessary.
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