Homework 2
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. Do you prefer to spend time with people of a similar level of education to yourself? Why or why not?
A1. I prefer to spend time with people of a different level of education. The gap of education doesn\'t mean who is superior or inferior. It means that lifestyles of everyone cannot be the same as mine. As everyone has their own different stories, I can learn from them by listening to and experiencing their lifestyles. I don\'t think I could develop myself without sharing ideas with others. If I stay in stubborn attitude, I would become an isolated person and would never have any friends. Being open minded to people is inevitable for us to live in one society.
강사 첨삭
WOW! Nice work Bomi! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
You gave good thoughts and I have come to know you better. I definitely agree with you. The best way for a person to grow is to be surrounded with varieties of people from all walks of life. We can actually learn a lot from them and not isolating yourself to just a few people of your preference! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
The gap of education doesn\'t mean who is superior or inferior.
>>CORRECT
It means that lifestyles of everyone cannot be the same as mine.
>>CORRECT
As everyone has their own different stories, I can learn from them by listening to and experiencing their lifestyles.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t think I could develop myself without sharing ideas with others.
>>CORRECT
If I stay in stubborn attitude, I would become an isolated person and would never have any friends.
>>CORRECT or
>>If I will choose to be in isolation, I would probably have no friends and no growth.
Being open minded to people is inevitable for us to live in one society.
>>CORRECT
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