Homework 20

ESSAY: Should there be a limit of cars on the road to lessen traffic? What do you think if it becomes a law? I do not think it is a good idea to limit of cars on the road to lessen traffic. First of all, it will make people more confused. That is because it is very difficult to make fair rules for this. How can we select who is approved to enter into road? Do we have to reserve the road? I think it is better to take transportations and to recommend to reduce people's cars.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for making time to do this homework!^^ I hope that you enjoy New York and make the most of that oppurtunity!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I do not think it is a good idea to limit of cars on the road to lessen traffic. >> CORRECT OR> i do not agree that lessening the cars on the road can lessen traffic.First of all, it will make people more confused. >> CORRECT OR> It might just confuse people.That is because it is very difficult to make fair rules for this. >> CORRECT OR> This rule would not be justified. How can we select who is approved to enter into road? >> How can we select who is approved to enter the roads? Do we have to reserve the road? >> CORRECT Or> Do we need to make road reservations?I think it is better to take transportations and to recommend to reduce people\'s cars. >> I think it is better to take public transportation and to recommend that people reduce the usage of cars.