Homework 20

2019-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Whose advice do you follow more, your parents’ or your friends’? I think I follow more my parents\' advice. Because they live longer than me, so they are choose solution more wisely. Also, I stayed more with my parents than friends, and I believe my parents more.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Ramie!
You did a good job in doing your homework.
Congratulations! :)

-Teacher Shelly-


HOMEWORK:
Whose advice do you follow more, your parents’ or your friends’?

I think I follow more my parents\' advice. 
>>> Correct
Because they live longer than me, so they are choose solution more wisely.
>>> Because they live longer than me, so they choose solution wisely.
 Also, I stayed more with my parents than friends, and I believe my parents more.
>>> Correct

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