Homework-20 Oct
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I was tired last weekend, but I cleaned my house and worked out.
I feel better after doing these.
2. I always check on my mother, because she doesn\'t live with me and old.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
Great job sharing your weekend activities and showing care for your mother! I like how you explained both your personal routine and your thoughtfulness. Keep writing like this! You’re expressing your ideas clearly!
~Teacher Polly
1. I was tired last weekend, but I cleaned my house and worked out.
I feel better after doing these.
2. I always check on my mother, because she doesn\'t live with me and old.
I feel better after doing these.
>>I was tired last weekend, but I cleaned my house and worked out. I felt better afterward.
2. I always check on my mother, because she doesn\'t live with me and old.
>>I always check on my mother because she doesn’t live with me and she is getting old.
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