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2020-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Writing Exercise: Do you set a limit on how much you\'re going to spend on a present or do you just buy what you think the person will like? Answer in 5 sentences or more. I set a price limit when I buy a present for someone and I 2 reasons. First, I know I can\'t control my self because I add wishlist too much. This made me take more time to decide a present. Second, I don\'t want to make someone feels pressure by my present. It\'s happy that when we got a present but we feel uncomfortable when we got an expensive present with out reason. So this is why I set a limit on how much I\'m going to spend on a present.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

This kind of writing is also good for your speaking skills.

I\'m glad you gave it a try.

It will familiarize you with terms that are used in daily conversations.

Please read and review the corrections below.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I set a price limit when I buy a present for someone and I 2 reasons.

>> I set a price limit when I buy a present for someone and I have 2 reasons for doing so.
First, I know I can\'t control my self because I add wishlist too much.

>> First, I know I can\'t control myself because I add too many things on my wish list.

This made me take more time to decide a present.

>> This makes it longer for me to decide on a present.
Second, I don\'t want to make someone feels pressure by my present.

>> Second, I don\'t want to make someone feel pressured because of my present.

It\'s happy that when we got a present but we feel uncomfortable when we got an expensive present with out reason.

>> We\'re happy when we get presents but we feel uncomfortable when we get an expensive present without a reason.
So this is why I set a limit on how much I\'m going to spend on a present.

>> This is why I set a limit on how much I\'m going to spend on a present.

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