HOMEWORK_200212
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise: Write an email thanking your mentor for the advice she gave to prepare you for your job interview.
Dear [Name]. This is [Name].
Thanks for your advice you help me to prepare the job interview.
It was really helpful so that I can prectice more alone.
I also can\'t notice that I have a bad habit which I don\'t see eyes of interviewer.
I also try to fix that you adviced me and I hope I can give you good news soon.
I will contact you soon. Have a nice day!
Thanks, Jeong
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Great job today!
The expressions that you used were simple and direct.
The statements you have given were also very specific.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Hello.
>> Correct
This is [Name].
>> Correct
Thanks for your advice you help me to prepare the job interview.
Thanks for your advice you help me to prepare the job interview.
>> Thanks for your advice that helped me prepare for the job interview.
It was really helpful so that I can prectice more alone.
It was really helpful so that I can prectice more alone.
>> It was really helpful so I was able to practice by myself.
I also can\'t notice that I have a bad habit which I don\'t see eyes of interviewer.
I also can\'t notice that I have a bad habit which I don\'t see eyes of interviewer.
>> I also didn\'t realize that I had habits that could have been bad in the eyes of the interviewer.
I also try to fix that you adviced me and I hope I can give you good news soon.
I also try to fix that you adviced me and I hope I can give you good news soon.
>> I tried to change according to your advice and I hope I can give you good news soon.
I will contact you soon.
I will contact you soon.
>> Correct
Have a nice day!
>> Correct
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