homework

2012-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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HOMEWORK: 1. Don't give ________ until the race ends. - up 2. Do you know ________ it will rain today? - if 3. I'm tired _______ I'm hungry. - and 4. We will go ________ if they don't come today. - even 5. Let's ________ out today. - go 6. What will we do ________ you? We'll lose the game if you don't play. - without 7. Are _______ leaving the neighbourhood? - they 8. What about ________? - them 9. Will ________ of them sing? - either 10. This book is ________ interesting. - very Hi, Louise. Today morning, I run a playground and played soccer with neighborhood-children. Actually I'll attend the semi-half marathon(10km) holding in Nov. 18th with my friends. So every morning I run about 5km in playground, lakeside and a low hill nearby my house. But today morning I exercised too much, so I'm tired even though it's morning now. Maybe I have to take a nap. ;) See you later~

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Song Ah!

Thank you very much for sending again your homework. Great job! You got a perfect score. Anyway, wow, I am amazed! I didn't know that you are interested in joining marathons. It's a good decision, though. I do hope you and your friends would be able to finish it. Yes, you are right, you need to take a nap. I'll see you in class later. Have a great rest! 

-Louise-

HOMEWORK:

 

 1. Don\'t give ________ until the race ends.

 - up

>> Correct.

 2. Do you know ________ it will rain today?

 - if

>> Correct.

 3. I\'m tired _______ I\'m hungry.

 - and

>> Correct.

 4. We will go ________ if they don\'t come today.

 - even

>> Correct.

 5. Let\'s ________ out today.

 - go

>> Correct.

 6. What will we do ________ you? We\'ll lose the game if you don\'t play.

 - without

>> Correct.

 7. Are _______ leaving the neighbourhood?

 - they

>> Correct.

 8. What about ________?

 - them

>> Correct.

 9. Will ________ of them sing?

 - either

>> Correct.

 10. This book is ________ interesting.

 - very

>> Correct.

 Hi, Louise.

>> Correct.

 Today morning, I run a playground and played soccer with neighborhood-children.

>> This morning, I went to a playground and played soccer with my neighbors.       

Actually I\'ll attend the semi-half marathon(10km) holding in Nov. 18th with my friends.

>> Actually, I\'ll attend the semi-half marathon(10km) to be held on Nov. 18th with my friends.

 So every morning I run about 5km in playground, lakeside and a low hill nearby my house.

>> So, every morning, I run about 5km in the playground, lakeside and in a low hill nearby my house.

 But today morning I exercised too much, so I\'m tired even though it\'s morning now.

>> But this morning, I exercised too much, so I am feeling tired now.

 Maybe I have to take a nap. ;)

>> Correct.

>> I might have to take a nap. ;)

 See you later~

>> Correct. Just put the correct punctuation mark.

>> See you later!

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