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2012-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.pail 2.plum 3.I'll 4.its 5.made 6.wright 7.you 8.hole 9.knew 10.meddle I love reading non fiction such a personal essay, travel books and classical books. Shakespear is my favorite author. His writing advise me like a generous uncle. I like pet. I had a dog 4 years ago. If he is alive, he is 13 years old. People like a cat, a dog, a bird and so on. It depends on people. Some people like to look after animals, other people treat animals badly.

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'A lot of us would like to move mountains, but few of us are willing to practice on small hills.' ~ Anonymous Good job on your written composition. I noticed that you\'re gradually improving just keep it up. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: 1.pail >> Correct2.plum >> Correct3.I\'ll >> Correct4.its >> Correct5.made >> Correct6.wright >> Correct7.you >> Correct8.hole >> Correct9.knew >> Correct10.meddle>> CorrectI love reading non-fiction such a personal essays, travel books and classical books.>> CorrectShakespear is my favorite author. >> Correct His writing advise me like a generous uncle.>> His writings advise me like a generous uncle.I like pet. I had a dog 4 years ago.>> CorrectIf he is alive, he is 13 years old. >> If he is alive, he is 13 years old now. People like a cat, a dog, a bird and so on.>> CorrectIt depends on people. >> It depends on the peoples\' choice. Some people like to look after animals, other people treat animals badly. >> Correct

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