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2021-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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1. Have you had the same experience as the woman in the article? Tell the story. No, I haven\'t experienced it yet. 2. What would you do if you were in the woman\'s shoes? I think I have to do most of things that she wants. 3-1. What is the emergency number used in your country? My country has 119 and we can use when we see fire or sick people. 3-2. Have you ever called the number before? Yes, I called it when my mother hurted in the bathroom.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Good job!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila

No, I haven\'t experienced it yet.
>>CORRECT

I think I have to do most of things that she wants.
>>I think I have to do most of the things that she wants.

My country has 119 and we can use when we see fire or sick people.
>>My country has 119 and we use it when we see fire or sick people.
OR>>We have 119 in my country and we use it for emergency cases.

Yes, I called it when my mother hurted in the bathroom.
>>Yes, I called when my mother got hurt in the bathroom.

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