HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Use the words in brackets as participles in the gaps.
1) a waited boy (wait)
2) an interesting story (interest)
3) a breaking car (break)
4) the fordetting pizza (forget)
5) the worked father (work)
6) I saw going him . (go)
7) the repairing computer (repair)
8) the talked students (talk)
9) excited fans (excite)
10) the girl lived next door (live)
Today is Thusday.
I am not adapt easily and quikly at work bacause long holiday.
I went to my hometown WONJU for Chuseok and National foundation Day of Korea
.
Chuseok is our most important holiday like Thankgiving day.
I spent time precious with my family,relatives and frineds.
I ate rice cake Songpyeon, I made wish on fool moon and I helped my parents for harvested sweet potatos and peanuts.
I arrived to seoul on 8:00PM yesterday.
I have taken the express bus for 2hour, fortunately there wasn't a traffic jam.
강사 첨삭
Hey there!
I am so happy to know that you enjoyed the most important holiday of South Korea.
I think so too that because of your long holiday, I\'m pretty sure you will not adapt easily with your work environment.
But don\'t worry, you will only work for two days and it will be weekend again!
Isn\'t that amazing?
Well, we will talk more about your Cheusok holiday later in class.
Thank you for making your homework!!
~T. Grace
Here are my corrections for you:
Use the words in brackets as participles in the gaps. 1) a waited boy (wait)
>>> a waiting boy2) an interesting story (interest)
>>>CORRECT!3) a breaking car (break) >>>a broken car
4) the fordetting pizza (forget) >>>the forgotten pizza
5) the worked father (work) >>>the working father
6) I saw going him. (go) >>>I saw him going.
7) the repairing computer (repair) >>>the repaired computer
8) the talked students (talk) >>>the talking students
9) excited fans (excite) >>>CORRECT!
10) the girl lived next door (live)
>>>the girl living next doorToday is Thursday.>>>CORRECT!
I am not adapt easily and quikly at work bacause long holiday.>>>I cannot adapt easily and quickly at work because of the long holiday.
I went to my hometown WONJU for Chuseok and National foundation Day of Korea.
>>>CORRECT!Chuseok is our most important holiday like Thankgiving day.>>>Chuseok is our most important holiday. It\'s just like Thanksgiving Day.
I spent time precious with my family,relatives and frineds.>>>I spent precious time with my friends, relatives, and family.
I ate rice cake Songpyeon, I made wish on fool moon and I helped my parents for harvested sweet potatos and peanuts.>>>I ate rice cake called Songpyeon. I made a wish when the moon was full, and I helped my parents harvest potatoes and peanuts.
I arrived to seoul on 8:00PM yesterday.
>>>I arrived in Seoul at 8:00 PM yesterday.I have taken the express bus for 2hour, fortunately there wasn\'t a traffic jam.
>>>I took the express bus and I only had 2 hours travel time. Fortunately, there was no traffic.
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