Homework(2013/07/16)
학생이 쓴 원문
Why is it necessary to have some quality time with your kids?
I think kids grow through parents love.
And, I think having a time with kids is one of way to show to my kids 'I love you'.
강사 첨삭
Hello there sir!!
A happy Tuesday afternoon~~
You\'re really sweet to your wife and your kdis as well.
Keep being a good family-man! :)
Please check the corrections I made.
Have a nice day and see you!
T.Kristel
Why is it necessary to have some quality time with your kids?I think kids grow through parents love.
>> I think kids grow with their parents\' love.And, I think having a time with kids is one of way to show to my kids \'I love you\'.
>> And I think having time with my kids is one of my ways to show them I love them.
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