Homework(2013/07/18)
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What do you think is the significance of an open communication among couples?
I think brain storming way is the significance.
1. The prohibition of evaluation and pending
2. Liberal thinking
3. Harmony and improvement...
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What do you think is the significance of an open communication among couples?I think brain storming way is the significance.
>> I think these are the significance of brain storming.1. The prohibition of evaluation and pending>> The prohibition of evaluations and pending decisions.2. Liberal thinking
>> A more liberal thinking/Open-mindedness.3. Harmony and improvement...
>> It fosters harmony and improvement.
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