Homework(2013/07/22)
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the funniest experience that you can remember with your family?
2 months before, Family celebration held at my eldest daughter's kindergarten. but my daughter sung a unknown song in my home before celebration day.
After singing, my daughter says, "it was secret!". ^^
강사 첨삭
Wow, that was so sweet! :)
Your daughter is so thoughtful.
Thank you for sharing the story with me.
Please study the corrected sentences and let me know if I got the story right.
See you,
T.Kristel
What is the funniest experience that you can remember with your family?2 months before, Family celebration held at my eldest daughter\'s kindergarten.
>> 2 months ago, there was a family celebration hel at my eldest daughter\'s kindergarten.
but my daughter sung a unknown song in my home before celebration day.>> But my daughter sung an unknown song in the house before the day of the celebration.
After singing, my daughter says, \"it was secret!\". ^^
>> After the performance, my daughter said \"I kept it a secret!\".
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