Homework(2013/07/24)
학생이 쓴 원문
Why do many people enjoy drinking alcohol?
Proper drinking alcohol, especially Soju, makes feel better.
I think that is why many people love drinking alcohol.
And, some people use alcohol by get friendly among them.
강사 첨삭
Hello there sir!!
A pleasant Thursday~~
Thanks for answering this question!
Always drink in moderation! :) Be healthy...kkk
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T.Kristel
Why do many people enjoy drinking alcohol?Proper drinking alcohol, especially Soju, makes feel better.
>> Proper drinking of alcohol, especially Soju can make people feel better.I think that is why many people love drinking alcohol.
>> CORRECT!! And, some people use alcohol by get friendly among them.
>> And, some people drink to get along with their friends.
>> And, some people drink to socialize.
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