Homework(2013/07/26)
학생이 쓴 원문
If you're given the chance to go to another country for the Summer vacation, where would you go and why?
I would like to go to New Zealand.
Because, I know that New Zealand has very clean nature. and I want to see that.
강사 첨삭
Good Evening!
Wow! New Zealand is indeed a beautiful country. I wish to join you once you decide to go there.:)
Anyway, have fun this weekend and make sure you do the things you have always wanted to do.
See you!
T. Kristel
If you\'re given the chance to go to another country for the Summer vacation, where would you go and why?I would like to go to New Zealand.
>>Correct!Because, I know that New Zealand has very clean nature. and I want to see that.
>>Because, I know that New Zealand has a very clean nature and I want to see that.
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