Homework(2013/08/06)
학생이 쓴 원문
What's your greatest goal in life?
I want to take a trip around the world by luxury car with my family after be a rich.
강사 첨삭
Hello there sir!!
A pleasant afternoon!
Sounds simple but grand, isn\'t it? Dreams are sometimes too difficult to achieve but with proper
motivation and a lot of handwork, it is possible to achieve it. :)
Keep being diligent for your family and yourself. Eventually, you\'ll be rewarded.
Anyway, please check the corrections I made for you sir!
Have a wonderful day!
T.Kristel
What\'s your greatest goal in life?I want to take a trip around the world by luxury car with my family after be a rich.
>> I want to take a trip around the world by a luxury car with my family when I get rich.
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