HOMEWORK-2014. 8. 19

2014-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. We all told the boss that we wanted to have / ours / salaries paid in advance but he just ignored / it /. 2. When the man asked me how Ihad got / my / address, I told him that I was given it by a relative of / me /. 3. Although / anybody / in the room seemed to follow / anything / said by the speaker, he never intended to simply his language. 4. I hope you will enjoy / yourself / at the re-union partly this weekend because I won't be able to be there / mine /. 5. We decided to do all the cooking / oneself / instead of hiring a catering company for the party. 6. Thousands of children nowadays prefer doing / theirs / homework with a background of pop-music to doing / them / in a quiet room. 7. You and / your / brother need to take time to prepare / yourselves / for the long journey which will start next month. 8. The students watched each gesture of / them / as if their teacher were a stranger. 9. its/ those, 10. We/ it.

강사 첨삭

Hi good evening [이름] ^^ Happy Tuesday! Thanks for doing your homework. I know that you did your best. Teacher is proud of you. I think we need to work on your pronouns and sentence pattern more. Please find time to go over your corrections. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. Teacher Nina   1. We all told the boss that we wanted to have / ours / salaries paid in advance but he just ignored / it /. >> OUR/ US 2. When the man asked me how Ihad got / my / address, I told him that I was given it by a relative of / me /. >> HIS/ HIS 3. Although / anybody / in the room seemed to follow / anything / said by the speaker, he never intended to simply his language. >> NO ONE/ CORRECT!4. I hope you will enjoy / yourself / at the re-union partly this weekend because Iwon\'t be able to be there / mine /. >> CORRECT/ MYSELF 5. We decided to do all the cooking / oneself / instead of hiring a catering companyfor the party. >> BY OURSELVES 6. Thousands of children nowadays prefer doing / theirs / homework with a backgroundof pop-music to doing / them / in a quiet room. >> THEIR/ IT 7. You and / your / brother need to take time to prepare / yourselves / for the long journey which will start next month. >> CORRECT 8. The students watched each gesture of / them / as if their teacher were a stranger. >> HERS9. its/ those, >> CORRECT 10. We/ it. >> ONE/ THEM

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