HOMEWORK 20150721

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Composition making! Do you think playing sports helps people work better as a team at work? Explain your answer when playing team sports that is good for us at work. almost people work with their co-worker also, all tast is connected each other we know to work is similar team sports specially, we can learn the cooporation and understanding thought the team sport both are very important when we work at the company with team mate. if we playing team sports often, that is effected to us about good point

Hi there! Happy hump day, [이름]! It makes me happy to see that you are exerting some effort to improve not just your speaking skills but also your writing skills. I hope that you won\'t get tired. Anyway, I checked your sentences and I noticed that you have a problem with upper case alphabets and punctuation marks. I want to remind you that when we write a sentence, we must always begin with a capital letter. Then, we must not forget to put the correct punctuation mark at the end of a sentence.  I hope that you will always remember that. Please check the corrections I made. Thank you and see you tomorrow.   ~Teacher Shanee   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Composition making!Do you think playing sports helps people work better as a team at work? Explain your answerwhen playing team sports that is good for us at work. >>> Playing team sports is good for the development of team work.almost people work with their co-worker >>> Almost all people work with their co-workers. >>> OR: Most people work with their co-workers.also, all tast is connected each other >>> Also, all tasks are connected to each other.we know to work is similar team sports >>> We know that working is similar with playing team sports.specially, we can learn the cooporation and understanding thought the team sport >>> Moreover, we can learn cooperation and understanding through team sports.both are very important when we work at the company with team mate. >>> Both are very important when we work at a company with our team mates.if we playing team sports often, that is effected to us about good point >>> We could benefit from often playing teams sports.