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2012-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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<Homework> 1. B: His dog is running running around the neighborhood without its collar. 2. A. We were going to do that anyway. 3. B: Marcus could have told us what he was planning. 4. A: The students all took off their hats. 5. B: You're going to have to do better than that, if you <Writing> I'd like to review what I can't explain in my speaking class. In korea Installment purchase is a general way to get a car. But most of the salary is spended to a car. And maintenance expenses is expensive such as Insurance and tax. So sometimes I feel regret that I bought a car. But I feel better when I drive on fine day. Now, my car is my best friend.

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Well done with your homework Ms. [Name]! Please have time to read my corrections to some of your sentences. I can\'t wait to hear your voice again. See you later! T.Sheela <Homework>1.B: His dog is running running around the neighborhood without its collar. >>Correct!2.A. We were going to do that anyway. >>Correct!3. B: Marcus could have told us what he was planning. >>Correct!4.A: The students all took off their hats. >>Correct!5.B: You\'re going to have to do better than that, if you >>Correct!<Writing>I\'d like to review what I can\'t explain in my speaking class. >> I\'d like to review the things I can\'t explain in my speaking class. In korea Installment purchase is a general way to get a car. >> In korea, Installment purchase is a general way to get a car. But most of the salary is spended to a car. >> But most of the salary is spend for a car. And maintenance expenses is expensive such as Insurance and tax. >>And maintenance expenses is expensive such as the Insurance and tax. So sometimes I feel regret that I bought a car. >>So, sometimes I regretful that I bought a car. But I feel better when I drive on fine day. Now, my car is my best friend. >> But I feel better whenever I drive my car during fine day. Now, my car is my best friend.

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