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2017-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Q. What are some reasons why privacy is important for you? A. Privacy is a sensitive area. Everyone don't want to show their every things. My life, space, everyday are enjoying in my own way is privacy. And this is only the most important thing in my life because it was my own.

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Nice Job, Amy!!!

I was happy to know that even if it was difficult for your to answer the homework; you took it in a positive way. Yes, through this kind of activity we can find our weaknesses and do our best to improve it. We have to do something about it and not to be disappointed with it.. Nice one!!!!

Thanks!!! I hope my plans will pursue this year.

T. Jeny

Q. What are some reasons why privacy is important for you?
>>correct

A. Privacy is a sensitive area.

>>Privacy is a sensitive issue.
Everyone don\'t want to show their every things.

>>Everyone doesn\'t want to show their personal things.
My life, space, everyday are enjoying in my own way is privacy.

>>I enjoy my own privacy especially my life and space as well.
And this is only the most important thing in my life because it was my own.

>>And this is only most important thing in my life because I own it.

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