Homework(20180104)

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for your composition! I\'m really happy for your first achievement this year. I hope things will go well through this year. Good luck!^^

T. JanE ^^

It\'s a groovy Thursday, Teacher Jane!
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Thank you for the congraturations!

>> Thank you for congratulating me. 

I was also happy to share my good news with you.

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I was so thrilled to get a job that can be sutable for my schedules . ;)

>> I was so thrilled to get a job that can be suitable to my schedule. 

As you mentioned, I appreciate that I still have time to spend with my kids and to prepare my new challenge.

>> As you mentioned, I\'m grateful for still having the time to spend with my kids, and to prepare for my new challenge. 

Take care and see you tomorrow! :)
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Fill in the blanks to make the sentence meaningfully complete, then elaborate your answer in two to three sentences.
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When I look at _the winter sea__, I feel _the calm__.

>> When I look at the sea in winter, I feel calm. 

I think especially the winter sea has a special and peaceful power to attract.

>> I think the sea in winter has a special power that attracts people. 

So when my mind is in knots, I usually look over the winter sea.

>> So when my mind is in knots, I usually look at the winter sea. 

Just doing that could bring the calm to me.

>> Simply doing that could make me feel calm. 

If you have something difficult, you\'d better go to the winter sea.

>> If you\'re having a hard time, you\'d better go to the sea in winter.