Homework[2019.02.13.]

2019-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I went to comedy hall in Seoul 5 years ago with Cub Scout students. At that time, I met Korean famous comedian name is Lee Sang Joon. He told me \'Are you teacher? I thought you are older brother!\' So I said \"Thank you, You look about 20.\" After that, He gave me a present.

강사 첨삭

Hello James!

This is a good story.

You also told it beautifully.

I like the expressions that you used.

You have to finish the story tomorrow.

Have a good night!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I went to comedy hall in Seoul 5 years ago with Cub Scout students.

>> I went to a comedy hall in Seoul with some Cub Scout students 5 years ago.
At that time, I met Korean famous comedian name is Lee Sang Joon.

>> That time, I met a Korean famous comedian named \"Lee Sang Joon.\"
He told me \'Are you teacher? I thought you are older brother!\'

>> He told me that I looked more like an older brother than a teacher.
So I said \"Thank you, You look about 20.\"

>> I thanked him and said that he looked like he was 20 years old.
After that, He gave me a present.

>> After that, he gave me a present.

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