Homework[2019.02.14.]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi James!
What a great way to start the week.
You described your story really well.
I was able to imagine the actions of the people involved.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
Look out especially for the correct use of punctuation marks.
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I was high school student. I played soccer with my friends.
>> Once when I was a high school student, I played soccer with my friends.
One of my friends was playing as a goalkeeper.
>> One of my friends was the goalkeeper.
Normally goalkeepers are not using head when they playing soccer.
>> Normally, goalkeepers don\'t use their heads when they play soccer.
But my friend was using his head only.
>> Correct
So me and my friends laughed until tears came from our eyes.
>> That\'s why my friends and I laughed until tears came out of our eyes.
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