homework{2019/1/9}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I will go on a trip.
2. I like travel.
3. I went hiking with my Mom and Dad.
4. I can\'t skateboarding.
5. I like taking pictures.
6. I don\'t like bumpy rode.
7. I use hiking stick from hiking.
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. I will go on a trip.
>> correct!
>> or: I will on a trip with my family on my next winter vacation.
2. I like travel.
>> I like traveling.
>> Or: I like to travel outside Korea.
3. I went hiking with my Mom and Dad.
>> correct!
>> or: I went hiking with my parents.
4. I can\'t skateboarding.
>> I can\'t skateboard.
5. I like taking pictures.
>> correct!
>> or: I like taking photos.
>> or: I enjoy taking photos.
6. I don\'t like bumpy rode.
>> I don\'t like bumpy roads.
7. I use hiking stick from hiking.
>> I use a hiking stick when I go hiking.
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