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Q : What do you make of the argument that when a language dies, its culture and history die with it?
A : Partly, I agree with this argument. Because the language could be identity such as Korea has own language. I thing if people lost their language, they also may have left their identity. People can\'t show us their culture and tell about their history. It is my reason that I think language dies, its culture and history die with it.
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Q : What do you make of the argument that when a language dies, its culture and history die with it?
A : Partly, I agree with this argument.
>>CORRECT!
Because the language could be identity such as Korea has own language.
>>Because that language can be the same identity as Korea has its own language.
I thing if people lost their language, they also may have left their identity.
>>I think if people lost their language, they might also have left their identity.
People can\'t show us their culture and tell about their history.
>>CORRECT!
It is my reason that I think language dies, its culture and history die with it.
>>It is my reason to think that language dies, that culture and history die with it.
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