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Q : What is the most common retirement age in Korea?
A : The common retirement age in Korea is about 60. But recently the opinion is suggested that retirement age should be extended. Because people\'s average life expectancy is logger than before. so today, we have to work more for our remaining years. But the discussion is continued between the people and companies.
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Hello Lilo^^
Thanks for giving me your answer! I guess retiring at age 60 is kinda late.
My parents have been working for more than 20 years and I want them to have some fun.
I mean like travelling and enjoying their time with their grandchildren. Retiring at age 50 or 55 is good for me - hahaha.
What about you? At what age would you like to retire?
Q : What is the most common retirement age in Korea?
A : The common retirement age in Korea is about 60.
>>CORRECT!
But recently the opinion is suggested that retirement age should be extended.
>>But recently the opinion has been suggested that retirement age should be extended.
Because people\'s average life expectancy is logger than before. so today, we have to work more for our remaining years.
>>Because the average life expectancy of people is longer than before, so we have to work more for our remaining years.
But the discussion is continued between the people and companies.
>>However, discussions between the people and businesses continue.
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