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Q : If you could ban tourists from visiting one place in your country, where would you choose? Why?
A : I think there\'s almost never dangerous or disrecommended specific place in Korea. But I want people to not visit Korea at particular season. That is SPRING. Generally spring is the best season to traveling, but in Korea, spring season might have attacked your respiratory organ with Asian dust and fine dust.
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Happy Friday^^
But I still want to visit Korea in spring season - hahaha!
See you later^^
Q : If you could ban tourists from visiting one place in your country, where would you choose? Why?
A : I think there\'s almost never dangerous or disrecommended specific place in Korea.
>>I don\'t think there are any specific places in Korea that are almost not recommended or dangerous.
But I want people to not visit Korea at particular season.
>>But I don\'t want people to visit Korea in certain season.
That is SPRING.
>>CORRECT!
Generally spring is the best season to traveling, but in Korea, spring season might have attacked your respiratory organ with Asian dust and fine dust.
>>Spring is generally the best season to travel, but fine dust is common in this season.
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