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Q : What\'s the longest you\'ve ever gone without sleep? Please share your experience.
A : That was about 24h the longest I\'ve ever gone without sleep. When I was younger than now, I\'m really hooked on hanging out with my friends. we had enjoyable time so much and lost track of time. Eventually it had caused to getting tired.
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Hello there!
When I was younger I used to sleep 2 hours or 6 hours only, but now I need more sleep.
Thanks for your answer today and see you later!
Q : What\'s the longest you\'ve ever gone without sleep? Please share your experience.
A : That was about 24h the longest I\'ve ever gone without sleep.
>>That was about 24 hours the longest I\'ve ever gone without sleep.
When I was younger than now, I\'m really hooked on hanging out with my friends.
>>When I was younger than I am now, I was hooked on hanging out with my friends.
we had enjoyable time so much and lost track of time.
>>We had an enjoyable time, so much and lost track of time.
Eventually it had caused to getting tired.
>>Eventually, it made me tired.
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