homework ; 20191022
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Lilo!
Always capitalize the first letter of the first word in your sentences. ^-^ Thank you for answering your homework. I will talk to you again tomorrow.
Enjoy the rest of the afternoon.
_T. Mayleen :)
The fear I have for the future is stability at my job.
>>> What I fear in the future is not having a stable job.
I think there is no permanent job nowadays.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: I feel like nowadays, there is no job that\'s permanent.
so we have to improve ourselves to survive.
>>> That\'s why we have to improve ourselves in order to survive.
we always have to make our abilities outstanding.
>>> Correct!
CAPITALIZATION: We always have to make our abilities outstanding.
sometimes I feel nervous about this life.
>>> I sometimes feel nervous about my life.
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