Homework 2021.9.1

2021-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

Claire

강사 첨삭

Hi Claire!

Thank you for the efforts in writing today. Your ideas are always fun to read. See you tomorrow! ^^

~~Teacher Kate


I like comfortable and friend like types of talking.

>>I like comfortable and friendly conversations. 

Because this type of talking makes people relaxed and less be nervous.

>>Because this type of talking makes people relaxed and be less nervous.

So the other person can express their opinions and emotions without being disturbed by the nervousness and awkward atmosphere in the room.

>>So the other person can express their opinions and emotions without being distracted by the nervousness and awkward atmosphere in the room.

To adjust to the comfortable atmosphere of a conversation, my favorite subject in conversation is not particular.

I usually follow the flow of conversation.

>>CORRECT!

Because it is more natural and natural conversation always leads the conversation into an interesting conversation.

>> it is more natural and natural conversation always makes the conversation interesting.

Everything can be the subject of conversation.

>>CORRECT!

For example, I found a mickey mouse in the shirt of other people, and you may ask him or her \"Do you like mickey mouse?\" this may lead the conversation.

>>CORRECT!

And let\'s suppose that he or she said \"Yes, I like mickey mouse. I saw mickey mouse in Disney land for the first time.\" right in this moment if you response like this “Oh there are lots of characters in Disney land! I also saw the Mickey mouse for the first time in the Disney land. I love it there. How about you? Do you like Disney land?” the subject of conversation changes from Mickey mouse to Disney land.

>>And let\'s suppose that he or she said \"Yes, I like mickey mouse. I saw mickey mouse in Disneyland for the first time.\" right in this moment if you respond like this, “Oh there are lots of characters in Disney land! I also saw the Mickey mouse for the first time in the Disney land. I loved it there. How about you? Do you like Disney land?” the subject of conversation changes from Mickey mouse to Disney land.

This example shows the flow of conversation and I like following the flow of conversation because this can create the comfortable and friend like conversation.

>>This example shows the flow of conversation and I like following the flow of conversation because this can create a comfortable and friendly conversation.

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