homework 2023.10.18

2023-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

Q, What is a rude greeting in Korea? Why? In common, 1) if you put your hands in pocket. it may look arrogant, especially when you are greeting older people. 2) when older people come to the place, it is polite attitude that younger people is standing up and greeting older people. In my case, someone says just \"hi\" , but no eye contact and indifferent, I feel unpleasant.

강사 첨삭

I couldn\'t agree with you more, Heather. Eye contact is necessary to convey your sincerity to someone. Stay safe!-Faith-
Q, What is a rude greeting in Korea? Why?
>> CORRECT
In common, 1) if you put your hands in pocket. it may look arrogant, especially when you are greeting older people.
>> Commonly, if you put your hands in pockets, you may look arrogant, especially when you greet older people.
2) when older people come to the place, it is polite attitude that younger people is standing up and greeting older people.
>> When older people come to a place, it is a polite attitude that younger people stand up and greet older people.
In my case, someone says just \"hi\" , but no eye contact and indifferent, I feel unpleasant.
>> In my case, when someone says just \"hi,\" but no eye contact and indifferent, I feel unpleasant.
OR However, personally, I am disappointed when someone greets me with a \'hi\' but doesn\'t make eye contact.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·