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2012-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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Holiday I went to boracay alone this year. But i usaully spent my spare time with my friends. Yes,churches,temlpes and schools usually have special programs such a musical, charity,event. There are a lot of diffrent nationalities in the world. So they have own celebratings for their holidays. For example,in Spain they enjoy watching a bulfighting and in Italy enjoy a tomato festival. I Think the five main items are clothes,cell phone, passport, ticket,money.

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'Learn something new every day under the sun. You will never get old if you do.' ~Lois Bey Be very careful again with your capitalization and punctuations Winnie. I hope this wil help you a lot. take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: Holiday>> CorrectI went to boracay alone this year. >> I went to Boracay alone this year. But i usaully spent my spare time with my friends.>> But I usually spend my vacation time with my friends.Yes,churches,temlpes and schools usually have special programs such a musical, charity,event.>> Yes, churches, temples and schools usually have special programs such as musical and charity events.There are a lot of diffrent nationalities in the world. >> Correct So they have own celebratings for their holidays. >> So they have their own way of celebrating their holidays. For example,in Spain they enjoy watching a bulfighting and in Italy enjoy a tomato festival.>> For example, in Spain, they enjoy watching bull fighting and tomato festival in Italy.I Think the five main items are clothes,cell phone, passport, ticket,money. >> I think the five main items are clothes,cell phone, passport, ticket and money.

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