homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Learning English is very important for our life. Because it's not a replace. If I want to talk foreigners, I should can speak English for myself. Even though people come from all over the world, if I can speak English, we maybe can communicate since it's a national language.
Our children are affected by their parents who have enthusiastc kid's education. That's the why we should have studied so early. I heard that many 2~3 old kids will be start to study English from their mother. I understand their kid's education, but it's too bad for kids, they're too young.
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much for your composition.
You are right all along.
Children learn from their mother, I agree.
So the end result would be, mother\'s should really do their best to learn and teach.
I\'ll see you in class!
~T. Jeny
Here are my corrections:
Learning English is very important for our life.
>>>Learning English is very important in our life.
Because it\'s not a replace.
>>>Because it cannot be replaced.
If I want to talk foreigners, I should can speak English for myself.
>>>If I want to talk to foreigners, I should speak English myself.
Even though people come from all over the world, if I can speak English, we maybe can communicate since it\'s a national language.
>>>So even though people come all over the world, we can still communicate with each other since I can speak English.Our children are affected by their parents who have enthusiastc kid\'s education.
>>>Children may learn from their parents if the parents will start to study English early.
That\'s the why we should have studied so early.
>>>CORRECT!
I heard that many 2~3 old kids will be start to study English from their mother.
>>>I heard that many kids, who are 2-3 years old start to study English from their mother.
I understand their kid\'s education, but it\'s too bad for kids, they\'re too young.
>>>I understand their kid\'s education but sometimes it\'s bad for them because they are too young.
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