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Transportation is first on my list. Before it invents, people can only walk and riding horse, but it's too much time if we want to go far. To invent the car, airplane and subway, inventors have many effort their energy and we're very comfortable now so, I'm very thankful them. Internet is second on my list. If I want to find some information, I must go to library before it invents. But I now live in flood of information. Just click computer then I can get the information what I want. IPhone is last on my list. I repect Steve Jobs who found the Apple is my role model. I think he was a genius because he was very powerful movie,music,computer and IT industies. We can listen the music, call the friends, search the inform by internet when we have a phone. He make it possible.

Hello there.^^ Nice job in expressing your thoughts here. There may be some slips in your construction, but the mere fact that you were able to write some properly is already a big deal. You truly are improving little by little. Keep this up and you sure will be better in no time. Have a great afternoon! _T.Jeny^^ Transportation is first on my list. >> Correct Before it invents, people can only walk and riding horse, but it\'s too much time if we want to go far. >> Before it was invented, people can only walk and ride horses. But it took too much time when they wanted to go far. To invent the car, airplane and subway, inventors have many effort their energy and we\'re very comfortable now so, I\'m very thankful them. >> To invent a car, an airplane, and a subway, inventors have to exert effort and all their energy for us to live in a  comfortable life, so I\'m very thankful with their inventions.Internet is second on my list. >> Correct If I want to find some information, I must go to library before it invents. >> If I want to find some information, I must go to the library before it was invented. But I now live in flood of information. >> But now, I live under a flood of information. Just click computer then I can get the information what I want. >> Just click the computer then I can already get the information that I want. IPhone is last on my list. >> Correct I repect Steve Jobs who found the Apple is my role model. >> I respect Steve Jobs, who founded the Apple,he is my role model. I think he was a genius because he was very powerful movie,music,computer and IT industies. >> I think he is a genius because he is very powerful in the field of movie, music, computer, and IT industries. We can listen the music, call the friends, search the inform by internet when we have a phone. >> We can listen to music, call our friends, and search information from the internet when we have a phone. He make it possible. >> He made it possible.