homework

2012-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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1. We discovered that there ( were we're where) bones lying in the gulch. - were 2. A small group gathered at the beach ( were we're where) the storm had hit. - where 3. ( Were We're Where) you hurt? - Were 4. What ( were we're where) they doing? - were 5. ( Were We're Where) not sure about our plans for tomorrow. - We're 6. (He asked me (were we're where) I was going. - where 7. (Were We're Where) on our way to the movies. - We're 8. That is (were we're where) I got my new shoes. - where 9. We (were we're where) not upset about the delay at the airport. - we're 10. Because of the glass on the floor people should watch (were we're where) they're going. - where Hi Louise. I'm so busy today. Because I have to submit a business plan until tomorrow morning to take out a loan from the government. So I'm writing the plan. I want to explain more, but I have no time. It's just 10 minutes before our class. See you~

강사 첨삭

Hi, Song Ah!

Please do not stress yourself too much. I do hope you'll finish it soon. Anyway, please go over number 9 for the correction. I hope that helps. See you tomorrow, Song Ah! Take care!

-Louise-

1. We discovered that there ( were we\'re where) bones lying in the gulch.

 - were

>> Correct.

 2. A small group gathered at the beach ( were we\'re where) the storm had hit.

 - where

>> Correct.

 3. ( Were We\'re Where) you hurt?

 - Were

>> Correct.

 4. What ( were we\'re where) they doing?

 - were

>> Correct.

 5. ( Were We\'re Where) not sure about our plans for tomorrow.

 - We\'re

>> Correct.

 6. (He asked me (were we\'re where) I was going.

 - where

>> Correct.

 7. (Were We\'re Where) on our way to the movies.

 - We\'re

>> Correct.

 8. That is (were we\'re where) I got my new shoes.

 - where

>> Correct.

 9. We (were we\'re where) not upset about the delay at the airport.

 - we\'re

>> Were

 10. Because of the glass on the floor people should watch (were we\'re where) they\'re going.

 - where

>> Correct.

 

 Hi Louise.

>> Hi, Louise.

 I\'m so busy today.

>> Correct.

 Because I have to submit a business plan until tomorrow morning to take out a loan from the government.

>> It's because I have to submit a business plan until tomorrow morning to take out a loan from the government.

 So I\'m writing the plan.

>> Correct.

 I want to explain more, but I have no time.

>> Correct.

It\'s just 10 minutes before our class.

>> Correct.

 See you~

>> Correct. Just put the correct punctuation.

>> See you.

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